Poem should be true expression and artistic presentation, rather than vent of ire or frustration (which is rampant in your writing). You seem to be a literature student. So I better 'shut up' :)
poem, or any writing for that matter, should be primarily for the writers expression. maybe venting is rampant in my writing, but that is why i write, because i have no other outlet for these feelings and because it helps me clear my mind, recognize my own feelings, and contemplate about steps to take. i don't think my poems need to be anything else
Enjoy the literary freedom. Hope the prime person reads you. Moreover, hope he understands you by now, and doesn't have any grudges. By the way, how it feels seeing him with other woman, if you get to see him?
the words seem to be simple. but i exactly did not get them.
ReplyDeletenever mind, these r jst ramblings
DeleteI thought it was poem
ReplyDeletemost of my poems are just vents from my stream of consciousness
DeletePoem should be true expression and artistic presentation, rather than vent of ire or frustration (which is rampant in your writing).
ReplyDeleteYou seem to be a literature student. So I better 'shut up' :)
poem, or any writing for that matter, should be primarily for the writers expression. maybe venting is rampant in my writing, but that is why i write, because i have no other outlet for these feelings and because it helps me clear my mind, recognize my own feelings, and contemplate about steps to take. i don't think my poems need to be anything else
DeleteEnjoy the literary freedom. Hope the prime person reads you. Moreover, hope he understands you by now, and doesn't have any grudges.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, how it feels seeing him with other woman, if you get to see him?
the "prime" person does not read me. i don't like seeing the person with other women
DeleteMake him read your poems. He should know how you feel.
DeleteYet to come over the possessiveness? Move on.
easier said than done, and easy for u to say when i dont know anything about u
DeleteYes, easier said than done. But that's what you have to do ~to move on.
DeleteYes, easier said than done. But that's what you have to do ~ to move on or suffer.
ReplyDeletei wont respond to preaching any more :P
DeleteSay I'm wrong, I will never offer any suggestion.
ReplyDeleteI'm sharing what I've learnt while living a fateful life.
im sure ur life has been fateful, does not mean that ur conclusions wll apply to everyone
DeleteBingo! :)
ReplyDeleteLove this one!!!!
ReplyDeletefunny conversations,
ReplyDeleteyet true,
this "anonymous"
is somebody
very close to your activities
~_~
I enjoyed a lot